this one is also uses othe companies logo it uses univeral our one is the logo which we made called new moon production the begining has noce strong shots bt the thitles could have been better rather then in a black screen with white new times roman title and the cast was better because it was'nt on black but it was in red and the font liiked very wierd. we saw a nice opening of woodes long shot showing us the location. I think that the shot of when the man was tring to tune the radio could have been more tighter but it was OK. they clearly showed the genre by one of the conventions which is moving shots not still shots that was very effective. the POV of the man I think could have been still they went over board with moving shots. the music was nice telling us false genre but it got annoying afterwords with going on and on and on. we see the man picking pu the gardning fork then it randomly cuts to him hamaring a nail. there was a nice graphic match if the rose and nice dawn scean with low angle of the gardner. that had the oprtunity of having enigma codes and both times they blew it away. first we knew that she was going to bump into a tree they gave it away by showng us the shot from the front. second time she delibrtly runes in ot a log which did'nt even look natural it was like it was'nt ment to be ther all this gives away what she is going to do next. I think this student should get a B because if good filming skills but few bits let them down.
